Wednesday, February 27, 2008

Blog 10- The Savages



When we woke up the morning after the hunters came to our shelter Piggy was a mess. He was complaining about not being able to see anything. We decided that we have to do something to get back his glasses. Ralph wanted us to go to Jack's hide out at Castle Rock and get the glasses . We had to look decent, clothed and shower, comed hair and clean faces. We had to be the stronger ones. And Jack needs to know when we come that we don't want to find. We want to get back what is rightfully ours in a peacful way. We started making our way by the cliffs to Castle Rock. Once we got there we stared up looking at what seemed like miles of rocky wall. “Who goes there?” shouted Roger in a firm voice. Ralph shouted back,
“ What do you mean, you can see it's only us.” Then Ralph blew the conch. Savages with spears appeared. Out of the rocks. Then A rock came out of nowhere and almost hit us. We looked up. Roger sat at the top of the castle. His hand next to a lever. “I'm calling an assembly. About Piggy's glasses and the fire. Wheres Jack?” Ralph said. Just then Jack appeared out of the forest. His face was disguised in black and green paint. Hiding his emotions.
“Go back to your end of the island! This is my tribe now!” yellled Jack.
“ But you stole Piggy's specs. And we want them back. There ours. If you had asked we would've let you share our fire. But then you stole, like a thief.”
“A what? Say it again!”
“Theif! Theif!” Ralph cried. The jack got very angry. The Ralph and Jack fighted only for a second because Ralph was reminded that he did not come to fight. He came to get Piggy's specs. Then Jack yelled, 
“Get them. Tie them up!” We looked at eachother, feeling very confused. Then two savages had their arms on us. We were being dragged behind Jack. Then they tied us together. We tried to move but we couldnt. We sat together, struggling to be free when it happened. We couldn't see that well because Some hunters sat in front of us. But something hit Piggy and he fell to the ground. His brains oozing all over the rocks. Then his body fell off the thin plank connecting the castle to the island. Then Jack looked us in the eyes and said "You two are part of the troop now." We tried to protest but it was no use. Now we were part of this group. Jacks tribe. The savages. 

2 comments:

QuinnB said...

Sianni-
I really liked your blog. I liked how you incorpaerated ralph and piggys thoughts with out having a whole bunch of dialoge.

I think it would be stonger if you described their sorroundings more.

-Quinn

hunter said...

I thought it was really good becuase you used a lot of dialoge exactly they way it was in the book. i also like how long it was.
-hunter